The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/09
Cute poem with some subtle reminders.. the last stanza actually packs a pretty good punch. Retirement in God's work does not exist.
09/17/09
Great rhyme, and nice job in saying what we all know as far as never retiring from God's workforce.
09/22/09
Nice work.
09/23/09
Loved the poem...it reminds me of my Mom and Dad's Sunday school class.