The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/09
This one made me smile.... and nice job surprising readers with the real voice of your MC at the end! Tweet!
09/17/09
I loved the surprise ending. Nice job.
09/22/09
I really enjoyed your ending. This was a unique spin on the topic, and I like that you did that.
09/22/09
Okay you got me, good writing thanks for the post.
09/23/09
Interesting take on the subject,,,and a very different than expected ending...lol!
01/26/10
Fantastic! Didn't see this one coming! Great job!
01/27/10
What a clever story (and creative take on the topic)! I only got a little suspicious near the end that the "children" might be pets. So, I was surprised at the fun punch line!

I've been away from the writing challenge for some time, so had to stop by and get acquainted and thank you for the comment you left on my "Operator's Lament" entry. I look forward to seeing you around here, and thanks muchly!
I love your POV, it took me a bit to get it, but when I did I thought it was so clever. Nicely done.