The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/05
You made me love your main character. Great work!
08/15/05
Your story was very well written! Catchy, descriptive first sentence that drew me in. Great read. So glad that at least one person's actions on the boardwalk displayed a Godly character. :)
Lots of sights, lots of things to think about. Loved getting into your main character's head! A great ending, too.
08/19/05
Very good details, loved the foot massage scene!