The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/09
Very good wordsmithing. Again, your piece has made it clear that there's no retiring from serving the Lord.
09/20/09
I agree with the previous commenter, good job.
09/20/09
I like your format and your message in this acrostic poem. Nice work "Wordsmither"!
09/21/09
Nice job with the words... "smithy."
09/21/09
Nice poem that ends with a great message--we never retire from working for the Lord.
09/22/09
I really liked your poem. It flows really well. Sometimes when people write a rhyming poem, it feels choppy and forced. Your poem did not have that problem.