The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/09
Excellent narration. I've read other stories and articles on the topic of being too busy, even when working for the Lord. You've also made it quite clear that we need to give God what's right, not what's left.
What a blessing for your MC: a Christian doctor dispensing a perfect prescription. Learning when to say "NO" is a leason worth learning. Good job.

Virgil
09/21/09
I agree with the comment about having a Christian doctor...best advice always comeds from a Biblical perspective.
Yes. Great reminder to slow down and spend more time with God. Kudos for this well written piece.
09/22/09
I think this is the first entry I've read that deals with the over-commitment side of retirement. The Biblical message infused in this is very good. Great work!
01/11/10
Very well done! Loved this doctor's prescription. I think I was on your wave length when I wrote my "Something More", Carole.