The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/09
Well this was kinda fun... a prequel to a previous entry. Interesting!
09/17/09
Had I not read the previous entry I would not have been able to follow your story as well. It seems as though you are telling the story in reverse.
09/17/09
Very nice. Reminded me of The Postman movie starring Kevin Costner.

May God bless and keep you writing forever.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship
09/20/09
Good writing skills, but I did not read the previous entry so I had no idea where it was going or where it had been.
09/20/09
This writing was good but I too was confused since I didn't know the story.