The Official Writing Challenge
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09/10/09
You presented a great lesson here in an engaging way. Good job!
09/15/09
I liked the way this piece was both a story and a devotional wrapped into one. A very creative style with scriptural teaching in the mix. I likes it!
~Cathy~
I could definitely see this in a devotional book. I like how you showed the difference between childish and childlike. Well done.
09/15/09
Lots of great points to ponder here: my favorite "take home" is the paragraph on investing in our prayers. I agree with all the others who call this a devotional read. Great job.
This is so engaging. I identified with the MC, and the principles regarding child-likeness, versus childish-ness are so true.
What an interesting take on things!! I am impressed with your writing skill but also your perception and discernment as a Christian. Big time kudos on this one!
09/16/09
Really excellent way of presenting a lesson as a work of short fiction...that made it very readable and teacherly.