The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the vivid descriptions of life for the child in this poem. Very enjoyable!
I think you would have either had to have lived or visited some place such as Vietnam to fully grasp what you have shared. When Cycloman took me for a ride in Saigon, and out by the rice paddies, it helped to give me a feeling what it was like to live there. Well written.