The Official Writing Challenge
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This sounds like a true story, and I love the interactions of sister and brothers. Oh! and the ending is perfect.
09/13/09
What a charming story! I can relate to the MC in so many ways...
Well done!
09/14/09
Great title, very engaging voice in this delightful piece.
09/15/09
Very nice story.
09/16/09
What an exceptional brother, especially at that young age. You had me laughing with your choice of dialogue.