The Official Writing Challenge
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09/10/09
Every girl could use some cocoa and wisdom from Missus M. What a sweet story, with a strong message. Well done!
09/16/09
An enjoyable read, but the last little nugget is what grabbed me. "Watch God whisper." Great phrase. Might have to refer to it sometime. ;)
A lovely story! I plan to reread it and pick out some things I need to remember from it. Great job! Kudos!
Karyn and Missus M were blessed to have each other, and I loved the dialogue between them.
09/16/09
This story had an excellent premise and beautifully imagined characters. The interactions between the characters felt a little choppy, and the story seemed as if sections had a little patched because of word length, but there are some real gems of dialogue in this one!
09/16/09
I especially enjoyed some of your phrases. I have at times commented on turning off the TV, CD player, video games, etc, because God doesn't usually shout when He wants to talk to you. He whispers.