The Official Writing Challenge
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Very clever; what a fitting, out of the box use of the topic. Nicely done!
You got me on this one, but now understand the nurse's reaction when Molly asked for her mommy. Great job with the topic and definitely held my interest.
Extremely clever and waaaaaaay out of the box!
Quite creative with a definite surprise at the end. Nicely written. Well done.
We are all still children in our inner-most beings, aren't we? Great job!
Oh, Sandy, well done! You are a master of surprises. Long time no see, my friend. I really like how you write. Since I spent many hours a week at a nursing home, this is very realistic, right down to the doll. Good job!