The Official Writing Challenge
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09/10/09
Very clever; what a fitting, out of the box use of the topic. Nicely done!
09/11/09
You got me on this one, but now understand the nurse's reaction when Molly asked for her mommy. Great job with the topic and definitely held my interest.
09/14/09
Extremely clever and waaaaaaay out of the box!
Quite creative with a definite surprise at the end. Nicely written. Well done.
We are all still children in our inner-most beings, aren't we? Great job!
Oh, Sandy, well done! You are a master of surprises. Long time no see, my friend. I really like how you write. Since I spent many hours a week at a nursing home, this is very realistic, right down to the doll. Good job!