The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/09
You painted a very realistic picture of the child begger in the Honduras. I have seen such children in Haiti, and in the Dominican Republic. It is a very sad sight to see. If this story has its basis in fact, I am glad all the siblings were blessed to escape this sad life. I also am inspired that they are all in the position to be ministering to those in similar circimstances.
The plight of these children is so sad. I enjoyed your writing style and was pleased the story had a happy end.
09/16/09
It is so sad to see children begging and misused. This is a story of hope and you took us on the journey. Good job.
09/16/09
Our many trips to Mexicali revealed the truth in your story. There is a wonderful dentist there that has a very similar story to tell. Great job in story telling and being able to touch my heartstrings.
09/17/09
What an intense, emotional narrative to read. Fantastic job with the tone of the piece...nicely done.