The Official Writing Challenge
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I love how the teacher learned the lesson from the children. Good job with this story!
09/10/09
This was told in a very realistic tone. Yes, today's children have very different backgrounds then the generations before them. God bless all the teachers out there who struggle to reach the tough ones.

I liked the simple message brought forth through one child's actions. A little child shall lead them....
09/11/09
What a precious story. The voices of your children are so authentic...you really pegged the conversation style of this age group. The lesson is a good one, because all of us need Jesus to help us do things "we kinda don't want to."
Good ending. Enjoyed reading this.
09/16/09
A hard truth well told. It seems that I have written on this topic many times in different ways, because it is ONLY through Jesus that we can keep one of the greatest commandments. "Do unto others as you would have them do unto you."