The Official Writing Challenge
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09/10/09
Vivid descriptions had me riding right along with your MC. A momentary mood shift as he mentioned his alcoholic mom...then the chapel. Dying to know who the sweet tenor voice belonged to. Good descriptive writing.
09/16/09
Your description of your bike trip took me almost by my aunt and uncle's place up Lake Ave, North of the 210 Freeway. I know that area well and you managed to take me back in time when things were much more carefree in my life. Thank you. Nice job.