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Vivid descriptions had me riding right along with your MC. A momentary mood shift as he mentioned his alcoholic mom...then the chapel. Dying to know who the sweet tenor voice belonged to. Good descriptive writing.
Your description of your bike trip took me almost by my aunt and uncle's place up Lake Ave, North of the 210 Freeway. I know that area well and you managed to take me back in time when things were much more carefree in my life. Thank you. Nice job.