The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/05
Beautifully done.
08/15/05
Great writing!
08/16/05
Wonderful descriptive writing. Excellent job!
08/16/05
I felt as if I was right there...so I'd say great job! Wonderful, descriptive writing! :)
Quite an "out of the box" idea - to take the reader sightseeing through your memories while passed out at the scene of an accident! Vivid and descriptive - good job. :-)
08/19/05
Very well written, great descriptions.
08/20/05
Loved the title and "descriptiveness" of the story. Her life seemed to be as shattered as the car window.
08/22/05
This got my attention beginning to end. Flipping through the pages, hoping beyond hope, the seagulls--hanging on the edge. Jesus to the rescue. Great story--great entry. God bless ya, littlelight