The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/09
The last lines of this piece paint a vivid picture and evoke a strong emotion. Good job.
09/09/09
Such a touching story of hope in the face of hopelessness.
Your carefully crafted piece told this story so very well from a child's perspective. Heart wrenching. Yet, totally love the ending. One leaf. One tiny bit of hope. God bless all the children who have to endure such trauma in their childhood.