The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh wow, this is so delightful and the characters and dialogues are believeable. I loved the descriptions but then my favorite season is Autumn; cool, bearing gifts of gold and crimson, apple pie smiles and heaps of crispness, squealing children jumping into veined beds of brightness. Oh, how I enjoy this time and your piece was just as enjoyable. Thx fo sharing it with us. :0)
You made fall come alive through the vehicle of a drab brown dress and a caring, talented sister. I loved the sisters' word games and the way you used them to sneak in the wonderful descriptions of fall.
Very creative entry and well written. Enjoyed this. Nicely done.
09/04/09
This was a sweet story of two sisters and the love they share--and you creatively wove this around the topic. Great job.
09/09/09
Great word pix! I guess I should have appreciated my stepmom more for her attempts to make us kids clothes out of feed sacks back during the years of post-depression.