The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh wow, this is so delightful and the characters and dialogues are believeable. I loved the descriptions but then my favorite season is Autumn; cool, bearing gifts of gold and crimson, apple pie smiles and heaps of crispness, squealing children jumping into veined beds of brightness. Oh, how I enjoy this time and your piece was just as enjoyable. Thx fo sharing it with us. :0)
You made fall come alive through the vehicle of a drab brown dress and a caring, talented sister. I loved the sisters' word games and the way you used them to sneak in the wonderful descriptions of fall.
Very creative entry and well written. Enjoyed this. Nicely done.
This was a sweet story of two sisters and the love they share--and you creatively wove this around the topic. Great job.
Great word pix! I guess I should have appreciated my stepmom more for her attempts to make us kids clothes out of feed sacks back during the years of post-depression.