The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/09
Well-written and memorable. I enjoyed this piece.
09/05/09
A wonderful story, mainly because one of my favorite past times is restoring antiques. However, I'm trying to connect the story to the theme.
09/06/09
That Audrey was quite a character. I felt that your story ended a bit abruptly. I was unsure whether the MC was already a believer and hence encouraged by the prayer or an undecided and hence challenged by the old woman's faith. A little more development would have resulted in a punchier ending. But nevertheless I enjoyed the sheer passion that your story expressed
09/08/09
I ejoyed the passion of the story, but thought it would be better suited for a topic other than autumn. I, too, would like to see the story expanded, in order to learn more about your characters.