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09/04/09
A cute story. Excellent job capturing the narrator's voice. I could hear the child's excitement as I read.
09/08/09
Lovely story about autumn from a chld's POV.
The childlike excitement is entertaining. I liked the interaction between her and her Mommy. :)
You have your child's voice down perfectly. The conversation is believable. I enjoyed this charming story.
09/09/09
Nothing like seeing through a child's eyes.

Enjoyed your story.

Mona
09/10/09
What a great piece of writing. You'll place high with this one! Kudos!