The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this entry, especially the line 'before the veil of winter drops'. I also learned a new word...'hoarfrost'. As someone who has been close to snow 4 times in my life, I appreciated the sound and meaning of this, new to me, end of autumn image.
I really like this. Very good rhyming. Nice word pictures. Well done.
The ease in which your poems are written makes me envious. You are an expert with meter.