The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/09
I like how the message of trusting in God was woven into the scenes you so vividly describe.

"The hills floated above the seas of rolling fog like ships at anchor." what a beautiful line!

Was it just coincidence that you chose colorful names such as Ruby, Amber, Hunter and Green(e)? Knowing you, I don't think so. funny girl!
09/04/09
Nice analogy. Do you think the fog in this 67-year-old brain will lift and it will return to bright sun shiny days?
09/04/09
I liked the title and the fog analogy. Hunter Greene? I can see you have a good sense of humor.
09/06/09
What a great title for a story about Autumn. This was a fun romp through the fog while an unforced but satisfying ending. Well done.
09/07/09
Thanks for the reminder that God's light can shine through the thickest fog. Very well done.