The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked this one. I wanted to know more about how they sorted out their problems especially June. You drew me in and that's a great quality in writing. I think it was the shortness and sudden impact of 'Derek had an affair.' that did it. It was unexpected and worked like a little bomb!
09/06/09
Full marks for creativity. A very different approach to the topic