The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/09
Adorable! Your story had me smiling ear from ear the whole way through!
09/04/09
Interesting story in the way it is told. Due to the theme being "Autumn," I was believing that Suzy was going out to tend the garden and was somewhat surprised when "Suzy is going to kindergarden."
09/06/09
An intriguing tale full of mystery and colourful description. I'm not entirely sure that I understood it all but it still made for an enjoyable read
09/07/09
I finally figured it out about halfway through. Up until then I was trying to figure out what Suzy had to do with something in the garden, and why it upset the mother so much...I laughed out loud when the light-bulb finally came on.