The Official Writing Challenge
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Adorable! Your story had me smiling ear from ear the whole way through!
Interesting story in the way it is told. Due to the theme being "Autumn," I was believing that Suzy was going out to tend the garden and was somewhat surprised when "Suzy is going to kindergarden."
An intriguing tale full of mystery and colourful description. I'm not entirely sure that I understood it all but it still made for an enjoyable read
I finally figured it out about halfway through. Up until then I was trying to figure out what Suzy had to do with something in the garden, and why it upset the mother so much...I laughed out loud when the light-bulb finally came on.