The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/09
I'm chuckling and thinking "shades of Calvin" I can see this as a childrens book with pages of rich illustrations to go with it.
09/03/09
This was charming, with a Junie B. Jones flavor to it! I enjoyed reading it!
~Cathy~
09/04/09
A very creative scene, although it seems as though it should be only part of a larger story.
09/06/09
A cute story. I enjoyed reading this piece.
09/07/09
Ditto on all of the previous comments. This story is so cute...full of whimsy...and I, too, could see in in a children's book ( in longer form, of course.)