The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/09
Great story with a great lesson. Granny knows how to pick her moments!
You used wonderful details to flesh out your story that led up to a beautifully implied message.
09/04/09
Oh, poor Russ in his disappointment. What a blessing to have a grandmother that knows just what to do and say. Your story has a gentle tone and threads of love woven within the exchange of words. I enjoyed this family and your writing made me care about them too--thumbs up on this one.
09/08/09
The gentleness of your story depicts what most grandmas are about. I don't know how many times I've thanked God that my grandma was there when my mom left her two sons and our Dad.
09/09/09
What a sneaky grandma! She got the boy peeling apples while she shared a great lesson. Very good autumn story:)
Great descriptions, I could "see" the day at the farm. Very enjoyable writing.
What a great piece of writing. You'll place high with this one! Kudos!