The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/05
Great entry, smooth dialogue, and your point came across loud and clear (pun intended :-))
Creative take on "anger"
Blessings, Lynda
LOL made me belly laugh at the end. God bless you.
02/01/05
Very clever ending to get the point accross.
02/02/05
Lots of food for thought. Well said. Flows nicely.
02/03/05
What a cute story! Thanks for the entertainment. Joanne
02/04/05
Novel entry. You got your point across. Wasn't daddy patient though for someone who gets mad all the time?
02/06/05
Ohhhhh!!! I'm telling! Don't those kiddos let all the cats out of the bag? Good entry with a kick.LOL