The Official Writing Challenge
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09/07/09
Oh, my goodness, I love the images in this poem. I also love the way each stanza's end is used as a building block for the end of the next stanza. Nicely done.
I love the unhurried feel of this poem and the lovely images too. Very, very nice!
09/10/09
Jim, this is mature writing, classical, deep, powerful, on subject. Professional.
Just wonderful on all accounts.

Mona