The Official Writing Challenge
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You have several excellent analogies among your descriptive paragraphs. Well done.
09/04/09
Awesome story with a wonderful lesson tucked inside.
09/04/09
Liked the parallels between the walnut and your MC's life--each maturing over time with God's help. Nicely presented.
09/10/09
Great story with some really good life lessons. Congratulations on your EC.
Great analogies and wonderful truth presented. Well written. Congrats on the EC!
Beautifully written. I liked your colorful analogies and I can relate to the nut, being one myself, grin. I liked how the lessons the main character learned weren't overshadowed by resentment or bitterness but a new way of looking at life, acceptance and maturity, a perfect ripe fruit with a not so perfect shell.Nice job and Congrats on the placing!You go girl.