The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story and reminder that sometimes our kids have the greatest wisdom, "Yes we can love lots of people." Nicely written.
It was obvious why Pop fell in love with Grammy Joy. I fell in love with her, too. You really made the characters come alive and did a wonderful job with the message.
09/04/09
Thanks for having Grandma Joy remind us that we sometimes have to get beyond ourselves and open up to other possibilities. Nice work.
09/04/09
I love Grammy Joy, too. Awesome story with a good message.
09/04/09
It has to be hard to adjust to what is obviously a big difference between one "grammy" and the other, but you delivered a great message on how to go about it.
09/04/09
Your writing made the characters and scenes come alive on the screen for me. That's the difference between showing and telling. . .and that's splendid writing. Enjoyed this and especially Grammy Joy--her name fits!
09/10/09
What a great piece of writing. You'll place high with this one! Kudos!
09/15/09
Wonderfully written with a sweet and tender message woven in the story...a pleasure to read.