The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/09
Great story and reminder that sometimes our kids have the greatest wisdom, "Yes we can love lots of people." Nicely written.
09/03/09
It was obvious why Pop fell in love with Grammy Joy. I fell in love with her, too. You really made the characters come alive and did a wonderful job with the message.
09/04/09
Thanks for having Grandma Joy remind us that we sometimes have to get beyond ourselves and open up to other possibilities. Nice work.
09/04/09
I love Grammy Joy, too. Awesome story with a good message.
09/04/09
It has to be hard to adjust to what is obviously a big difference between one "grammy" and the other, but you delivered a great message on how to go about it.
09/04/09
Your writing made the characters and scenes come alive on the screen for me. That's the difference between showing and telling. . .and that's splendid writing. Enjoyed this and especially Grammy Joy--her name fits!
09/10/09
What a great piece of writing. You'll place high with this one! Kudos!
09/15/09
Wonderfully written with a sweet and tender message woven in the story...a pleasure to read.