The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/09
A great tale of an amazing autumn journey. The poem was just a bit out of rhythm in a couple of small places, but overall, it was very enjoyable.
09/04/09
Rhyme never ceases to amaze me as to how the bard can use it. Nice work.
Makes me wish I were a poet, or a little red leaf. I liked the way the leaf and the activities on the banks of the river merge together to tell the autumn story, very creative.
09/09/09
What a journey! Just lovely.

Mona
What a great piece of writing. You'll place high with this one! Kudos!