The Official Writing Challenge
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08/19/05
Very nice :) some nice touches of humor.
You write with an assured, polished hand - I am impressed by the quality of this piece. It is enigmatic and open-ended, in true literary style. You convey character and a sense of place so well. Thank you.
08/22/05
I am thoroughly enjoying this story..I hope you continue. It's so real, as though there is no struggle involved in your writing, portrayal's and charactors. I like the smooth flowing, and intamacy with your charactorizations, descriptions that stay with us. Good entry.. God bless, littlelight