The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/09
Interesting take on autumn. I have said this before about other entries...yours sounds like it could be/should be expanded into a much larger, more detailed form. I'd like to know if the young "enforcer" makes it through the winter in Lorraine Town.
09/04/09
Yes, I definitely agree that your short story could and should be developed intoa full-blown novel. You piqued my interest.
I like your MC. Nice strong character. I'd also like to see this expanded to a much longer story, or even a novel. The potential is definitely there. Well done.