The Official Writing Challenge
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Good job. You certainly know children and the way they babble on. I felt quite at home in this piece.
This is so sweet...I love the childlikeness. Sounds like a lovely family...!
08/19/05
Cute -and I could relate, having one of those almost angels myself :)
Precious memories how they linger..... I'm a mother of four angels. They are almost all grown now, but I remember those days. Great job!
08/31/05
Wendy, I thought this was a delightful entry when I first read it and I enjoy it even more this time around. My favorite bit is where your daughter starts talking about everything she saw. It's a treat to read. Keep an eye out for this as the 500 Member Showcase on the Home page at FaithWriters on the week starting 12th September. Love, Deb