The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/09
How poignant a story...so sad, yet tender in its remembrance of a special loved one.
09/03/09
You have painted a character that evokes a heartache for all that was lost and what could have been. I was trapped in your words start to finish.
~Cathy~
09/04/09
What beautiful word pictures! And what a beautiful way to mix the splendor of autumn with the not so splendid. However, you have once again proven that we CAN find beauty in all things.