The Official Writing Challenge
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Well, this is a sci-fi out of the box entry for sure. I'm ready to read what happens next:)
Science fiction with a new baby and a message of faith. You managed both well.
I love sci-fi, and this was very appealing. Keep experimenting--you're doing great!
Okay, Allison, I am not a sci-fi fan, but I commend you for stepping out into other genres. That being said, this is very well written, and the dialogue is realistic--as realistic as sci-fi dialogue can be. :)

Good job with the topic and with an unfamiliar genre.
Well written wade into the the sci-fi genre. Nicely done.
I admire anyone who writes sci-fi as I enjoy reading it but my head hurts at the thought of thinking that hard to come up with it! I think you did a really good job!