The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/09
Very cool. Just imagine Eve, not knowing how the birth experience worked. Wow! Love this. Only wish it were longer.
08/27/09
Your story really makes me wonder what Eve thought, having had no experience of a new baby. I like how you showed that while God had them leave the Garden of Eden, He did not take away His guidance from Adam and Eve.
08/31/09
You have described and captured the scene of the first born on earth in painful labor very well!
09/02/09
Hmmm.... Eve and the very first birth... never really considered what that might have been like for her.I agree this piece could be developed into a very interesting longer story. Good job!
~Cathy~