The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/09
Wow, if this is a true story, you are to be commended. This is what happens when people listen to God. A prayer was answered that day. Great writing!
08/27/09
I'm glad that you listened...and heard truth. I'm sure that young mother learned to listen, too. Well done!
08/31/09
I would have liked to know the connection between the MC and these young parents. it would have enriched the story a bit.
But, this is so true of many young parents today. They just don't know.
Interesting story.
Mona
When kids have kids, they need lots of help. Hooray for the caring adult in this story.
I loved that the MC listened to the nudge that many of us ignore. I am sure the baby was grateful as well! Good job with the dialogue. Could have used a little more explanation as to the circumstances of this family and the relationship the the MC. Well done.
09/01/09
I would also have liked to know more about the connection between the parents and the MC who came to the rescue.