The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/09
Wow, if this is a true story, you are to be commended. This is what happens when people listen to God. A prayer was answered that day. Great writing!
08/27/09
I'm glad that you listened...and heard truth. I'm sure that young mother learned to listen, too. Well done!
08/31/09
I would have liked to know the connection between the MC and these young parents. it would have enriched the story a bit.
But, this is so true of many young parents today. They just don't know.
Interesting story.
Mona
09/01/09
When kids have kids, they need lots of help. Hooray for the caring adult in this story.
09/01/09
I loved that the MC listened to the nudge that many of us ignore. I am sure the baby was grateful as well! Good job with the dialogue. Could have used a little more explanation as to the circumstances of this family and the relationship the the MC. Well done.
09/01/09
I would also have liked to know more about the connection between the parents and the MC who came to the rescue.