The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/09
Oh, this is heartfelt.

I thought the second part after the ~~~ was particularly excellent.

I liked how you wrote in about fear being constant and taking every duplicate item out of sight.

Is this a true story?
09/01/09
Heart-wrenching. You told the story well.
Mona
Heartbreaking and yet a story of God' sufficiency. Well done!
Difficult to read yet encouraging too. Thank you for this story.
09/01/09
I cannot imagine the sense of loss, knowing there should be two babies, but only one surviving. But as your MC discovered, God does give us grace to get through whatever we have to. I am glad there was such joy in the end.
This one broke my heart, but the repeated phrase, "God's grace is sufficient..." held me together and gradually mended Mom's shattered heart.

Knowing moms and dads who have had to endure this kind of pain, I could see how very realistic this was.

Excellent writing.