The Official Writing Challenge
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Hehe - LOVE the tenderness AND the silliness! Too cute! Fun and poignant piece all at once. Not easy to do.
I can just see that big burly man holding the poor little girl at arm's length...just because of a dirty diaper...I laughed out loud! Loved the tender sentiment of the poem. So much love was evident.
Congratulations on your second place level placement.
Tender and sweet; what a lovely poem. Congrats on your EC!
Tells the story so well. I love this!
Congrats! Deserving.
This was a very enjoyable, cute and funny poem. Yes, as previously said, can picture Pops holding at arms length his precious daughter as he calls out his wife's name. Loved the last stanza and the play with words Congratulations.
Oh, too, too funny. :-) I too love your word play. A very well deserved 2nd place and EC win!