The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/09
Awesome story.
08/27/09
You did as great job painting the picture with your vivid descriptions and minute details. Tender story.
Creative. Thanks for taking me back in time.
A very enjoyable read with a well-crafted ending. Great writing.
08/31/09
I thought this was excellent. You did a great job of creating atmosphere.
08/31/09
This is a wonderful entry. It reads like a Charles Dickens story.
You have a talent for setting the scene and for believable dialogue.
Mona
Wonderful story of Mercy...Great dialogue and setting. Nicely done.
09/01/09
Great story, I really enjoyed this. It's good to be reminded that a lot of sad beginnings take on happy endings. You did a good job with the dialect. Very believable.
09/03/09
Congratulations on your third place win. I knew the story was awesome when I read it.
09/03/09
Fantastic story, Pat! Loved it! Congrats on your EC! :)
09/03/09
YAY, YOU!

Wow...this was FANTASTIC. I got chills reading it.

Richly deserved EC, my friend. Proud of you! :)

09/03/09
So many unsung heroes who save countless lives everyday. I thank God for them. Thank you for reminding me to do so.
Congrats on a well-deserved win.
Mona
09/03/09
Heartwrenching and heartwarming at the same time. Great job!
The dialogue and the picture you painted just sent me back in time. All the characters could have stories of their own. This was very creative.
Congratulations on a most well deserved placement for your beautiful story.