The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/09
Awesome story.
08/27/09
You did as great job painting the picture with your vivid descriptions and minute details. Tender story.
08/27/09
Creative. Thanks for taking me back in time.
08/28/09
A very enjoyable read with a well-crafted ending. Great writing.
08/31/09
I thought this was excellent. You did a great job of creating atmosphere.
08/31/09
This is a wonderful entry. It reads like a Charles Dickens story.
You have a talent for setting the scene and for believable dialogue.
Mona
09/01/09
Wonderful story of Mercy...Great dialogue and setting. Nicely done.
09/01/09
Great story, I really enjoyed this. It's good to be reminded that a lot of sad beginnings take on happy endings. You did a good job with the dialect. Very believable.
09/03/09
Congratulations on your third place win. I knew the story was awesome when I read it.
09/03/09
Fantastic story, Pat! Loved it! Congrats on your EC! :)
09/03/09
YAY, YOU!

Wow...this was FANTASTIC. I got chills reading it.

Richly deserved EC, my friend. Proud of you! :)

09/03/09
So many unsung heroes who save countless lives everyday. I thank God for them. Thank you for reminding me to do so.
Congrats on a well-deserved win.
Mona
09/03/09
Heartwrenching and heartwarming at the same time. Great job!
09/03/09
The dialogue and the picture you painted just sent me back in time. All the characters could have stories of their own. This was very creative.
09/04/09
Congratulations on a most well deserved placement for your beautiful story.