The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the twist at the end and through your realistically descriptive writing,I relished the feel of the little boy in my arms. I must say this entry took me back many years ago, when I did a little bonding of my own, but I had my babies several years apart.
08/29/09
What a nice entry. Now that I've read it and know the twist at the end - I really appreciate the title. Two separate babies, both Mama's boys. What a good Mommy, spending time with both babies. Of course, this is a good day when she's not pulling out her hair;) Very nice and brought back lots of memories for me, too.
08/31/09
Delightful! I'm so glad this mom chose bonding time to chores. Great job setting the scene, the mom's character sings with joy at motherhood, and the added "bonus" twist at the end is priceless! :)
At first I thought, "Oh no, the writer forgot to change the spelling of all the baby's names." Then giggled to find that there were two.

Nice twist.