The Official Writing Challenge
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I was glad to be around when this poor girl's maternal instinct kicked in and glad to know that beneath that sarcasm was actually love for the baby. Very well written.
08/28/09
I like the way that the girl's harsh attitude started to mellow by the end. I suspect however that she could become quite a burden on the adopting parents! Nicely written
08/29/09
This is very good. You really captured the mind of an unwed mother. So many conflicting emotions. Nice writing.
I was concerned that this mother's emotions might change too quickly, leaving the story less believable. That didn't happen though. You did a good job of showing her conflciting emotions and change of heart in a way that was believable to the reader, and you did it in only 750 words. Good job!