The Official Writing Challenge
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Charming idea-- love the characters and the dialogue between them. It was easy to figure out who the Nazarene's are and who the baby is. I think the POV voices are stable animals? Maybe something to make that just a tad clearer at the end...
I figured out they were animals, just trying to guess if they were cows or what? Cute story from and unexpected POV.
This was very cute, especially after I figured out it was the animals talking. lol. Very out-of-the-box.