The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked how you ended it: 'it was a good death'. The only death that IS good!
Love the sharp play on words.

Reading well written stories rich in faith, make me wonder, what are the poor people reading?

p.s. Truth is I can remember some fearsome dudes in my past that got saved. You brought up a past not that far from reality. Bravo!
08/25/09
I like the nitty gritty of this. It is life raw and cold. We expect people to understand faith and the Christian life. Until people are saved they are clueless. Very emotional piece, with a happy ending. I love happy endings!
08/26/09
You tell an interesting story. A good ending, for sure.
If I were to make one comment, it would be to tell less and show more.
Good job.
Mona