The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/09
Where oh where do you come up with such creative ideas? This was a sad story (mostly) but also very true to life. I'm so glad I'm not a bear.
Yes, sad but not. You got inside the mother bears head very well!
08/21/09
This is beautiful. Excellent descriptions, and a poignant reminder of the relationship creation should have with the Creator. Well done!
08/24/09
Really good piece which i enjoyed immensely - being an ardent lover of nature. Thank you for this beautifully written and interesting story.
08/24/09
A nature story that causes one to stop and ponder. Enjoyable.
Mona
A very interesting nature story. I liked your little
persevering bear.
08/24/09
I enjoyed this out-of-the-box story. Besides the heart-warming aspect, it is also very educational.
Extremely creative and right on topic. Very good read with a bittersweet ending. Well done!