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08/20/09
I love this mc, even if he is a tree. You've given him a wonderful personality. You've made winter interesting through his eyes. I love the last paragraph the best.
08/20/09
This is a grabber. Grabs the reader and doesn't let go. How I love it! sweet, poignant and so on subject.
A winner, for sure.

Mona
08/21/09
I truly, really, thoroughly enjoyed viewing winter through the voice of your tree. This was a freshly rewarding read and I, too, liked the ending. Great work.
Winter weary was just the right way to describe your tree--made me glad it's summer here.
08/26/09
This was a great perspective of winter, and I loved all the observations the tree foound worth discussing.

There was one thing that distracted me. The tree cannot know what the little white haired being feels, (loves). It can only know what she does and how he thinks she feels.

Aside from that, this was a totally feel good story.
08/26/09
Wow! Loved this - it's like some fairy tale scene from a Walt Disney film. Great! Colin