The Official Writing Challenge
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Do I see a twinkle in your eye? It surely twinkles all over this story. God bless you too much.
08/20/09
Oh, how I love this one! Reminds me so much of Wind in the Willow stories that my brother Brad used to love as a little boy.
Very special.

mona
Good flow, consistent voice. I liked it alot!
08/21/09
Very cute story with good flow, creativity, and a Bible lesson too. I can picture the illustrations in a children's book already.
A beautifully written story - perfect for children. Manfred's lesson would be a good one for them too. I love it!