The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a good story. The pronouns got a little confusing sometimes, though. I'm not sure how hard the topic was hit - that might hurt you but I do like this one.
Superb Biblical fiction! My heart was racing, even though I knew the end. You squeezed the topic in at the end, but you probably aren't strong in that category. Nevertheless, your writing is outstanding, your talent very evident.
The scene was set really well. I like the way the cold kept advancing into Macabee's heart as the story progressed, culminating in the icicles forming around it. Excellent.
I liked seeing this familiar story through the eyes of the heretic. Masterfully done.
"He's...She's...Not today." Great dialogue. I was right there in this story. Excellent job. :)