The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/09
This is a good story. The pronouns got a little confusing sometimes, though. I'm not sure how hard the topic was hit - that might hurt you but I do like this one.
08/20/09
Superb Biblical fiction! My heart was racing, even though I knew the end. You squeezed the topic in at the end, but you probably aren't strong in that category. Nevertheless, your writing is outstanding, your talent very evident.
08/20/09
The scene was set really well. I like the way the cold kept advancing into Macabee's heart as the story progressed, culminating in the icicles forming around it. Excellent.
I liked seeing this familiar story through the eyes of the heretic. Masterfully done.
08/23/09
"He's...She's...Not today." Great dialogue. I was right there in this story. Excellent job. :)