The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice! This would be a great story to read to my grandkids. Nice analogy and fun dialogue.
08/20/09
I like this a lot. It is a unique approach, and was fun to read.
08/20/09
This was cute with a nice message tucked within for your readers.
I liked the creative pov for this one, but most of all I liked your title!
08/22/09
This is a very creative story and a thoroughly enjoyable read. Love the bear's voice and the way the 'message' was nestled so well within the narrative that it wasn't in my face but I got it.
08/23/09
Wouldn't it have been nice if we 'people' had been a little more sensible too? Think about no 3rd shift jobs, 80-hr work weeks, midnight sales, Sunday stores open, and all the things we cram into an already busy life.
Loved this simple, pleasing story.
Mona