The Official Writing Challenge
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I get vivid pictures in my mind from this beautiful poetic prose.
08/21/09
Your descriptive phrases throughout this wonderfully creative piece are A+. Your writing is a benchmark for the rest of us. Masterful!
08/22/09
Delightful piece of descriptive prose! Didn't take me where I thought it would - doubly delightful. yeggy
08/23/09
Wonderful prose. Kudos to the horse.
08/23/09
Within a story filled with general observations, you write in detail about a gate, a horse and deeper...a blind horse. I felt I 'hibernated', too as you drew me under.. This was brillantly done. Superb.

Mona